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September 19, 2012
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I speak to you in love; I speak to you in truth,
You're the one thing I cant bare to lose;
You came into my life so spontaneously,
And I can't understand, why I love you deeply;
It's been so long since I've felt this way,
I guess it would happen again, what can I say.

You are amazing, a lot more than you see,
So so perfect, an excellence in humanity;
But you are so far away from me,
But in time we may finally be;
Together, forever, doing what we love,
What more can I ask for, it's what we love.

In the darkness you shine right through,
Breaking the borders that restrain you;
I see you're destined for greatness,
And to you I have to confess;
That you may have been here for not so long,
But I can see I don't want you gone;
Not now not ever, I need you with me,
We'll lie in the rain and sit by the sea;
Smiling so much, our happiness is bliss,
And hold our breath and embrace the kiss.

So remain amazing, you deserve the best,
I don't care what they say, fuck the rest.

Because when you smile it's all that matters,
Because everyone else's lives are in tatters;
They don't understand and they never will,
They cannot see it nor feel the thrill,
I get from always talking to you,
So I will always be with you.
just a poem i wrote about feels >.<
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WaterfallUchiha Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student General Artist
i luv ur poem, . . . im sure if u show the luv of ur life this she'll just cry n melt in ur arms, u created a masterpiece
myattriot Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
hehe thanks i hope so =) feel free to look at my other poems too =D
WaterfallUchiha Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Student General Artist
definetleh i will x]
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